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Elizabeth Started All The Trouble                           by Doreen Rappaport

4/5/2016

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Disney Hyperion, Publisher synopsis: She couldn't go to college. She couldn't become a politician. She couldn't even vote. But Elizabeth Cady Stanton didn't let that stop her. She called on women across the nation to stand together and demand to be treated as equal to men-and that included the right to vote. It took nearly seventy-five years and generations of women fighting for their rights through words, through action, and through pure determination . . . for things to slowly begin to change. With the help of these trailblazers' own words, Doreen Rappaport's engaging text, brought to life by Matt Faulkner's vibrant illustrations, shows readers just how far this revolution has come, and inspires them to keep it going!

Nugget: Elizabeth Cady Stanton couldn't do a lot of things but that didn't stop her. 

Need Enticement: The hook is about Abigail Adams 250 years ago writing a letter to her husband with the famous words, "Remember the ladies!"
---- Ok, the hook doesn't refer to the main character what so ever. It is 250 year before the main character. I read it as pure information dumping.

Escalation: We start with 4 characters going to London to end slavery. Then finding out that because they were women they didn't have a say.  ---- Here is my issue, teachers who read the stories to children and even children themselves are going to have a hard time sympathizing with these ladies. Why would anyone think that they can visit another country and tell them how they can run things. Put it in kid terms, you don't go to your neighbors house and tell them how they are doing things wrong.

Page turn and the characters are back in New York. The women decided they need to write something to discuss women's rights, a sort of declaration.

​--- Honestly this story is a lot of name dropping. As a history buff I loved all the tidbits about people but I got lost. We introduced so many characters and so many plots. Sojourner Truth and the fact the black women had even less rights, Amelia Bloomer and her comfortable clothing, Susan B. Anthony and the fact that she is single and doesn't have to stay home to take care of the kids and husband. 

Satisfying Ending: The story ends with the Nineteenth Amendment but I can't say that it was satisfying.  I have no clue where this story has taken us. To me it was like reading a "people magazine" and every page was about someone else and the story promise about Elizabeth Cady Stanton was not delivered, she was lost in the book.

Sources: A great list of women trailblazers is provided in the back and limited resources. A great compilation of dates to remember milestones in women's history.

The remaining I am leaving blank. I love this author. But, I am truly disappointed. This book would have served a much better purpose had it been presented as Trailblazers and each two page spread dedicated to a woman who contributed to making a difference in women's history. 
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4 Comments
Lindsey McDivitt link
4/6/2016 11:43:14 am

Interesting discussion of this book Kristen! Thanks for pointing out some things to look for--helpful to this NF writer. I'm easily overwhelmed by all the folks involved in the suffrage movement. Love the cover by Michigan's Matt Faulkner!

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Kaye Baillie
4/15/2016 06:49:14 pm

Really interesting to learn about this book. I totally agree with your Trailblazer idea. That would have been perfect.

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Charlotte Dixon
4/16/2016 05:42:41 pm

Thank you for this post on Stanton. I've read other books about this amazing lady. I'm thankful to all these ladies who made it possible for women to vote.

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Virginia Rinkel link
6/23/2016 04:11:57 pm

I read this book awhile ago, and really liked this discussion. Strong characters.

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